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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-06 07:46 PM


Raindrops.

~~Daniel J D~~

The wind and the rain
Friends in nature's domain
Causing chaos, bringing beauty
What would it be like without raindrops

Raindrops, on the roof top
Raindrops, and puddles to hop
Wet hair, wet feet, so free
Until mother screams, we flee

Softness of rain, fogged up glass
Yawns, and laziness hoping no class
Alas! The bus is here, the wind blows
Raindrops, I love your rainbows

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-06 07:52 PM


It rained here today, Daniel, just softly. Even with a chill, yes, I felt it while reading this poem..again.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-12-06 07:59 PM


Nicely said, like a gently falling rain.
Love the rain...makes me want to write, and write, and write......
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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