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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
If I Was If I was a canyon and you my very quake we would be meant for each together life we make If I was a valley and you my only crop together we would grow where golden rays dew drop If I was a river and you the winding roads we would live forever crossing as love unfolds If I was a mountain and you a loving sky we would share a blanket where loving birds may fly If I your only wind and you just a whisper our love would be carried an undying ember |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! Your love shines in every word of your beautiful verse! (smiles) Your love will always be so lucky to have such a loving, beautiful love like you forever! (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
The word that comes to mind is..sweet...it's really a very sweet poem...hope that doesn't seem shallow...I enjoyed...  K |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When all the If's of your day are answered, I hope they have come as easily to you as this poem did to my ear. Again, a warm welcome to Passions. I hope you take time to read other poets' work and find time to comment on them. We get a lot of inspiration from our members, and I'll bet you'll see it, too... |
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