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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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0 posted 2001-12-06 08:32 AM


My Dreams After All

In my dream she is beautiful
full of life, she is meaningful

And with her presence truly felt
her honor, her trust ..., my heart melt

She's showered in a glowing light
face unknown, shadowed, out of sight

Faith, purpose swarm amongst the flames
as passions char the nights remains

I must know by the break of dawn
before the day breaks and she is gone

What is your name, who do I call
to fulfill my dreams after all

Quiet, no sound,silence is heard
in movement I heard every word

Pain, hurt, confusion and her loss
poured from her eyes baring her cross

Arms wrapt tightly around the whole
thru the binds I could see her soul

When sparked by the glimmering flames
my mind searched the possible names

Only one comes to me that's true
it starts with "Y" and ends with "U"

This is you, the name I will call
to fulfill my dreams after all.



© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 2001-12-06 09:18 AM


This is genuinely beautiful...very very moving...well done and thank you for the read...

K

SmartChick
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2 posted 2001-12-06 09:27 AM


This is a wonderful dream.
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-12-07 05:09 AM


written very nicely Craig...*s
catalinamoon
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4 posted 2001-12-07 07:49 AM


Craig, this is a beautiful dream, and a beautiful poem.
Sandra

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-07 05:02 PM


*sigh* you write love and romance from such a poetic soul. I always melt when reading your work. Well done, Craig. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-12-07 05:05 PM


Love this....wonderful Craig!!
Very romantic!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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