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Rick
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0 posted 2001-12-06 07:19 AM



A kiss goodbye to day no more
A dawn, a dusk, now passed, one more
Awakened, met and kissed goodbye
To sleep again, till night does die

© Copyright 2001 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
walker
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1 posted 2001-12-06 07:35 AM


Sad, and full of love. Great poem.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-12-06 10:10 AM



Rick...this likes me, Very Much!

Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-06 10:45 AM


*sigh* mmmm I prefer a kiss hello....this is beautiful, Rick. Filled with tender romantic feelings. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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