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Marge Challenge: Take Me Back To Yesterday
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Marge Challenge: Take Me Back To Yesterday |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Today, I'm scared sometimes, challenged sometimes - disturbed by predictions Those prophecies made by some giants of time -- dead legends; yet living in so many memoried cells, charging I've survived the yesterdays quite decently, (I must add) while tomorrow throws its hands of beckon while the tick-tock carries on Today, the air around me whispers those 'take me back to yesterday' sounds in my ears with that perplexing surround- sound effect Like haunting emanations from a didgeridoo echoing thoughts of the living years Today, all I did was to pick up a wearing away photograph of young times when the only haunting sounds that could cause scare were the ones emanating from the buxom teacher in my class, particularly during the surprise-quiz days 'Stop dreaming and get on with it!' she screamed and I am back to living today ! thanks, Marge, for the trip down memory lane...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! I too love to reflect to the past a lot or dream of the future, where I don't feel so stressed out when always pushing myself in the present too! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, your memories shine with beauty! We all love you, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow! Very good Sudhir. In the beginning of the poem you mentioned cell memory..something I just read a book about. I would love to discuss it with you. Sanda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Very good, I enjoyed |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Excellent!! Truly..your writing has developed...isn't this place marvellous for that?? Well done Suddy...(no, I'm not even going to crit it heh).  K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ 'tomorrow throws its hands of beckon while the tick-tock carries on' So impressed am I by this thought ... it keeps playing in my head~ Thank you for being inspired to walk through the meadow of your mind~ Wonderfully done, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you, one... Thank you, all... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very good. Enjoyed. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you mirror man... Glad you enjoyed... Regards, sudhir |
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