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I love you
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I love you |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66
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I love you are such a strong words And shouldn’t be taken lightly Do not say them unless you mean them Because if you don’t mean them then I really do not want them. When you say I love you and they Aren’t coming from your heart I’m gonna start hating Them when they come From your mouth. Please do not put me in that position For I do truly love you and you mock Me when you say them and they are Untrue to your heart I am begging you please do not put me through that Others you have been with put up with it And believed that it was real However, you must realize that I am not that gullible and can see right through Those fake words that I hold so dear. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My boyfriend said to me the other night when we were talking that"your gonna want me to say I love you soon" And I was silent but the truth is I dont want him to speak thouse words if they arent for real...I hope you enjoy my poem ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ "the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart" [This message has been edited by Guardurthoughts (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Deep, honest thought here...impressive. |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
Very wise and deeply felt...I remember when I said the words and did not feel them..as an escape to avoid the chaos of the truth..so much we learn in time of love... VR |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I think as we get older the words hold such a deeper meaning to us and are only used when truly felt. This poem is so very honest and has a lesson for us all to benefit from. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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