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SEA
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0 posted 12-05-2001 04:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Relent not, peaceful drops of rain
Soothe with timeless healing refrain
Favor me with your waters pure
I am bound by sound, soft allure

Fall ‘ere steady, in metered time
Proffer sweetly, poetic rhyme
Touch in me with each drip of drop
Emotions purge forth, dare not stop

Surely is my heart’s remedy
In tune with  soul’s own melody
Graced to paper, thoughts in inking
Shared with others gently linking

Offering up reverent plea
continue rain, fall steadily


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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(smiles) Your beautiful love in your words always showers with beauty upon these blue pages, sweet Susan! (smiles) Your soul always sings with such sweet, tintinnabulous melody! Love and happiness and emotion shines from your gorgeous verse always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) More, more! I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-05-2001).]

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I can use a steady rain of your meter
do you have it poured handy by the litre?
Seems I have a bit of work to do on my own
but I'll take this lovely straight away home...
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Sea,
I really liked this. Sometimes it seems the words do seem to fall like rain and other times you go over a waterfall and don't even get wet. Hopeless romantics must have an outlet.

Roger

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Hey! I like your style. We need rain desperately down here in the southeast. It's the dry season, but...it wouldn't hurt my water bill any...Great read!

^_^ LadySofia

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Ah Sea, This is beautiful!
So...this is what you have been up to while I was 'under the weather'  
~Hugs to you, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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We received a few days of heavy rain here recently...heaven sent...James
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Continue, SEA, write steadily

1derful, gal, just 1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Sea, lovely words and thoughts put together so well. Thank you for the enjoyment you have given me this morning.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

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Relent not, peaceful drops of rain
Soothe with timeless healing refrain
Favor me with your waters pure
I am bound by sound, soft allure

Fall ‘ere steady, in metered time
Proffer sweetly, poetic rhyme
Touch in me with each drip of drop
Emotions purge forth, dare not stop
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the rain has always been one of your sweetest muses and this lovely piece is proof. Beautiful write of rhyme sea-girlie.
jm
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*sigh* I love sonnets and as sonnets go this one is a masterpiece. BRAVO!!!**Hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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SEA~

'Surely is my heart’s remedy
In tune with soul’s own melody
Graced to paper, thoughts in inking
Shared with others gently linking'


As fine a piece as I've seen you write~
Just lovely, gal~  Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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12 posted 12-06-2001 01:06 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Susan - very nicely done!  Sonnets are not that easy, but you make it seem otherwise.
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Sea,beautifully written!

Juanita

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thank you all very very very much   It's still raining......
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It started to rain here about an hour ago, it is soothing in it's way.  Enjoyed.
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*sigh* Beautifully done, SEA. I love it!

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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SEA,
Spoken like a true Oregonian! I've experienced the weather and now can connect it to life too. Thanks.


The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-07-2001).]

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Enjoyed this very much.  A rain sonnet.  Very good.

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This reads like something from a book. It's very nice, SEA

Dennis

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Makes me want a Latte be the shore outside a cafe with the rain just pouring down!!!!  Great job!  I love it when poetry takes me somewhere...and this one does!
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You and your rain, Susan.   LOL!  It's raining here right now and I was just on my way out the door to look at sailboats.  Grrr@rain.    Nice work, sweetie. (((hugs)))

Michael

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Sue...a beautiful sonnet expressing so well
part of nature that we oft times don't like
to have around us....Send some our way...
we desperately need it...  
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Hi SEA!

I love the rain, it is so refreshing! However, I don;t like getting caught in the rain when I am wearing a really nice outfit LOL! or have a really nice hair do! hehe
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You paint a very beautiful picture of a rainy day, Sea...I loved the poem and I love rainy days.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

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