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walker
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0 posted 2001-12-05 04:22 PM



You are the perfect lover
You write poetry to the heart
You give free love
sometimes giving in to romance
You're part of a big puzzle
in this subliminal world
You are the perfect friend
You give peace to the soul
You take them by hands when they are lost
You keep a silent vigil
waiting for them to pause
then you offer hope
No attachments
no compromise
You're perfection
in this fantasy world

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 12-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2001-12-05 04:42 PM


As is your poem...just perfect.  You know I loved this one, walker.
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2 posted 2001-12-05 04:58 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) And to him you will always be the angel of love in his fantasy world! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Gaia
3 posted 2001-12-05 06:12 PM


AbSOULutely beautiful.    
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4 posted 2001-12-05 06:43 PM


This poem is just perfect too...  

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Florence

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