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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-12-05 03:19 PM



My MiniGuitar Man

~*Marge Tindal*~

You've scored a direct hit
with an arrow of love to my heart
Now ... and forever
I want my words to impart
a heart-felt 'I love you'
from the very depths of me
For you are all I dream of
for now and through all of eternity~

I'm dancing with sheer joy
at the music from your heart
You've touched the dance in me
with your love notes right from the start~

You are simply the hero of
this beautiful book of everlasting love~
Until time moves through the end of me
I'm gonna love you for foreverly~



*For the love of my life~
December 5, 2001

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Hypnosis
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1 posted 2001-12-05 03:23 PM


Ah such a beautiful poem of the emotions of love.  It is very powerful indeed.  Very nicely done Marge!

      Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-12-05 03:24 PM


Wonderful to have found the love of your life.  Very nice.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-12-05 03:29 PM


Just lovely Marge...lucky guy!  
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-12-05 03:31 PM


VERY lucky guy

sodpossom
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5 posted 2001-12-05 03:33 PM


Very sweet and beautiful!
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6 posted 2001-12-05 03:39 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Marge, the love of your life is going to swoon reading this! (smiles) May his loving heart forever bring sweet music to your ears, as your loving heart will skip into eternity! (sigh) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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7 posted 2001-12-05 03:44 PM


Marge,there are no words to describe this beautiful poem.I love the illustrations you had in this poem.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-12-05 05:50 PM


Hypnosis~
Welcome to Passions !
Thank you for the read and reply~

Joyce~
Yes ... each love is special and this one VERY special~

Enchantress~
WEll ... he's thinking you're right ...
and I'm thinking I'm the lucky one~
Thank you, sweet lady~

InterLoper~
*Libra smiles*

SodPossum~
Thank you very much~

Noah~
Yes, thank you~

NorthCarolinaGirl~
Thank you so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Kethry
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9 posted 2001-12-05 06:04 PM


Marge,
it's wonderful that you are in love and wonder-full that you allow us to share vicariously.
Good on ya, it's about time you got what you deserve!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-12-05 06:11 PM


Kethry~
Thank you so much ...
Actually I've received so much more than I deserve ...
but I'm keeping it anyhow ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

misguided angel
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11 posted 2001-12-05 07:10 PM


Marge, I hope you tuck away all that extra love for a special night  
Loved this poem.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Denise
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12 posted 2001-12-05 07:13 PM


Lovely, Marge! Good for you!  
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13 posted 2001-12-05 07:21 PM


Foreverly.  This is good.
Suetang
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14 posted 2001-12-05 08:44 PM


Marge
Such a wonderful dedication to the special one you love. Your words were filled with love and romance and came straight from the kindest of hearts.  Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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15 posted 2001-12-05 09:00 PM





Well, I thought we were gonna keep it
quiet....but what the heck!!!!!!!!!!!


Alwye
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16 posted 2001-12-05 10:35 PM


"I'm dancing with sheer joy
at the music from your heart
You've touched the dance in me
with your love notes right from the start" --So sweet and touching, Marge.  You're a wonderful romantic, I love that.     Beautiful work!

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

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17 posted 2001-12-05 10:39 PM


Wow. I wish I could write of such undying love. Alas, I know it not. When I read this all I could think of was: I miss my ex, but my aim is improving. Looks like you hit the bullseye!

^_^ LadySofia

Corinne
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18 posted 2001-12-05 10:41 PM


Dang Marge,

Give me some of them happy pills, will ya?

So happy for you, my dear!

Cor

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19 posted 2001-12-05 10:48 PM


Wow! It is truly wonderful to see such true hearts...

VR

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-12-05 11:03 PM


MisguidedAngel~
You're a doll !  Thank you for stopping in~

Denise~
Thank you, sweetie~

MirrorMan~
Thanks so very much~

SueTang~
I appreciate your sweet reply~

Balladeer~
WE were supposed to keep it quiet~
Now ONE OF WE had to blow the cover~
What EVER am I going to do with you~
You plucking my strings ???  
Doing a darned good job of it I'd say ! !

Alwye~
Thank you.  
I'm incurably romantic and loving every minute of it~

LadySofia~
Yes, you could call it that~
It seems my target has been zeroed-in on~

Corinne~
Tee-Hee !  I'm 'overdosing' ...  
Thanks, gal~

VirgoRains~
Welcome to Passions !
Thank you so much for the read and reply~

*AND ... sharing with you all ...
He not only plays guitar and writes music,
he carves these lovely 'mini-guitars'~

I'm a very lucky lady to be loved so dearly~

Thank you all dear friends~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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