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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-12-05 12:05 PM





The Ship

Captain this ship’s sail
Leave me not to way of wind
Harbor me safely

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Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2001-12-05 12:15 PM


Drop your billowed sails
Rest in protected shallows
Where waves are gentle

Gloom

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2 posted 2001-12-05 12:22 PM


~Lady In White~



~here is a smile haiku~

regards
~sudhir~

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(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) May loves power forever rest you safely to shore and comfort you forever! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, I always love your words! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Lady, today....me too   I love this  
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-12-05 12:56 PM


LadyInWhite~
What lovely thoughts in search of serene harbor~
Loving this~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-12-05 02:12 PM


I am your captain
my hands control the rudder
sail into my arms

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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7 posted 2001-12-05 02:14 PM


Very beautiful!
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8 posted 2001-12-05 02:25 PM


clean...smooth edges...floats lofty against the wind...

dug it Lady

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9 posted 2001-12-05 07:24 PM


Beautiful!
Rick
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10 posted 2001-12-06 05:15 AM


Dear Lady In White, I like these small words of wisdom, well done.


Captain this ship’s sail
Leave me not to way of wind
Harbor me safely

Steer her well my friend
May waters calm lay awaiting
As we journey on

Sincerely
Rick


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11 posted 2001-12-06 06:32 AM


so few words, so much said.   You have a wonderful way of doing this lady.  May your vessel always be held in safe harbors.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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12 posted 2001-12-06 02:41 PM




Wonderful......
Simple and so well expressed.....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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13 posted 2001-12-06 02:58 PM


Shoals treacherous threat
hull unwary thoughts too
steady hand guides through

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14 posted 2001-12-06 03:50 PM


Held in safe harbor
the winds will bring peaceful calm
harbors of tranquil.

Had to revisit this one Hon.  BUMP!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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