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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-12-05 09:50 AM

I saw him riding, grin in the wind,
On his black beauty of a cycle,
None understood, the likes of him,
For the roughness hid the soft,
Scratch him and he’ll bleed
If with knife or heart words,
For inside there still that need
To express the inner Dark Stranger.

Gloom

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-05 09:52 AM

oh yes, this is an excellent write

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-12-05 09:53 AM

You have captured who he is just perfectly!
This is wonderful! *big smiles*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

3 posted 2001-12-05 09:57 AM

hey...who dat?

hell gloom, we all have a few dozen folks hiding inside us..don't we?

humble thanx

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-05 09:59 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Yes indeed, behind the solitude and roughness he expresses on the outside, much love and beautiful inner-beauty shines within. (sigh) It is amazing all we are all so unique and have so much special emotion within us all! (big hugggssssss) You are so talented, it is always a pleasure reading your beautiful words! (big huggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2001-12-05 10:04 AM

OWG?

One
With
God
?

Open
Wheel
Guy
?

I enjoyed your poem Professor. Thanks for the insight.

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2001-12-05 10:22 AM

Thank you, Sea
Glad you liked it

Thank you, Gentle Spirit,
I don’t anyone could capture him
Except for a pretty girl like you
And then just his heart.

Thank you, OWG
Nice to see you here,
Saw you here a bit earlier, but it rode off
Like a black b~ and I barely got a chance to read it.

Thank you, Noah,
Glad you liked,
He’s a good guy, I like him, you would too

Thank you, Poet deVine,
I feel he’d rather answer that,
I don’t like calling the younger folk old

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 12-05-2001).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-12-05 10:30 AM

Although you have never seen me Gloom, I do appreciate those sentiments.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2001-12-05 10:35 AM

Oh yes indeed
Owg really as a soft centre
Hope

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

9 posted 2001-12-05 10:40 AM

Donna are you sure?

Thank you, Hope
You take the soft center , I’ll take the Bike

Gloom

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-12-05 10:53 AM

You lost me on this one

I haven't a clue!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

11 posted 2001-12-05 11:13 AM

EXCUSE ME!!! Poet deVine is a LADY!

Don't make me come over there and smack you! LOL

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

12 posted 2001-12-05 11:30 AM

Thank you, Irish rose,
Sorry you got lost, OWG is a friend
From another place and time,
This is sort of a welcome

Excuse My “Stewpity”, Poet deVine
Correct and noted for future reference,
Shall I look for you in Black leather?

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2001-12-05 11:38 AM

hmmm.........I was wondering that very thing myself.......*laffs*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

14 posted 2001-12-05 11:50 AM

Professor, I'm SO glad you fixed that. But now everyone will just think that I'm being rude by yelling at you! And I would never yell at anyone....well...maybe the occasional cellphone-talking driver!

The only leather I own is a wallet - not very interesting huh?

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

15 posted 2001-12-05 12:02 PM

Gentle Spirit,
Perhaps, I just dreamed of a lovely spirit and assumed it was you

Poet deVine
Perhaps you should talk to that Texas guy
What’s his name… Interloper,
I’m sure he has a bit of leather, chaps and stuff
He’d be willing to loan you
Probably has a selection of sizes too

Gloom

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