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Healing The Heartbreak
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Healing The Heartbreak |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra 
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The smiles and the laughter Blonde hair and blue eyes I really truly thought You weren't like other guys You were charming and sweet And fun to be around too Through the night I found myself Falling in love with you You asked me back to your place And I thought that I could see Through the night you'd found yourself Falling in love with me But gold always tarnishes Flowers wilt and die And very quickly I found out You were an awful guy You took my heart and broke it You took advantage of me When all I needed was your love And some security But I can rise above you I don't need you any more You were just a waste of time See you later, there's the door "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, I like your attitude! Just shake the dust from your feet and keep on truckin'!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
((((hug))))))) Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Rebecca, my heart cries out to your loss, but I am also so happy you had the courage and will to throw him out and find what your heart reallyw ants. (sigh) I believe with all my heart you will find the most perfect love of your dreams, and he will make you happy forever! Just believe in your loving heart, and all your dreams will come true! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautifil heart, sweet Rebecca, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Probably wan't gold after all ... just brass. Well written! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Well done.Glad you were able to move on. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bec~ Love the emotional release~ *Big HUGS* It's just wonderful to see you writing and posting, love~ Awww, shucks ... here's another *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well said! Glad to see you gave him the boot! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Serenity...That's exactly what I did! I'm not going to let a man get in my way! Irish Rose... Thanks for the hug! Mistletoe Angel... I've found the perfect love of my dreams, and he does make me unbelieveably happy. Interloper... Probably wasn't gold. He was a bit of a cheapskate *lol* Sodpossom... Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Marge... Thank you for the hugs. I'm really loving getting back into poetry. Enchantress... A person like that deserves nothing but the boot! Thanks for reading. Thank you all! Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." -Winnie-the-Pooh [This message has been edited by Bec (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Woo hoo! What a class act! You showed him what you're made of Bec. Wonderful write. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bec,you go girl!    Juanita |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bec....right on, girl. It takes a woman sure of her own worth to talk like that....you obviously are. Never settle for less than you deserve |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Good for you! |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
misguided angel... I'm glad you enjoyed it. He got everything he deserved! NCG... Thanks! Balladeer... I know that he wasn't worth it, I've got someone that is! SmartChick... Glad you liked it. Thanks guys! Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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