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The Lesser Traveled Road
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The Lesser Traveled Road |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Walk with me, let us see, where this path travels to, Quietly, let things be, we’ll walk hidden from view, The path took, they won’t look, seldom walked anymore, Gone from mind they can’t find this trail with footsteps few, Yet you know, where we go, we’ve never been before. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a nice surprise from you this morning--nice change of tone from you, and it sounds like an intriguing invitation to me, Prof! Good morning!  I liked. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Serenity, I am pleased you like it, I guess it comes from reading Frost before going to bed And wishing for a touch of snow, Just to help the spirit of the season along. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Gloom, I realy like this one..... Beautiful! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Sweet,Sweet Professor Gloom How beautifully written, and so softly spoken. I myself was always one to take the roaf less traveled. As I see are you! )))HUGS((( Have childlike faith...and laugh accordingly. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I love this.The road less traveled mean more adventure for the two and not so many people coming through. Peaches  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done, nothing left out, nothing else needed! Everything fits right into place! I love poems that do that. Very well done! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Lesser traveled maybe but still I am one to enjoy the walk. I liked the way this poem made me think. **Hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Snow? you said snow??? Bite that Gloomy tongue.. I want palm trees on Cape Cod by next year...  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Professor Gloom. I like this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I liked this piece a lot. Depending on what tone is used to read it...it could sound rather sinister. Good write Gloom. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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