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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-04 09:04 PM


Everyday (Inspired By Marge Tindal's Serpentine Form)
By: Noah Eaton
12/4/01

Dance with me tonight in the moonlight, my love
Love me like there’s no tomorrow
Tomorrow we’ll cherish every sunrise and sunset together
Together we are one, two hearts, one soul, singing as our hearts melt
Melt into my arms, we’ll be anointed in the starlight
Starlight cascades down your hair as you play the moon harp
Harp, my love, for we’re wedded together for eternity
Eternity glistens in your eyes, your lovely vision is now so very clear
Clear is our flight from here, for we are sparrow lovers
Lovers bound for happiness ever after, conjoined and destined
Destined to tread softly in ivory wings of our hearts through time
Time slows in your every skipped heartbeat, every time you sigh in rapture
Rapture fills your fervent spirit, to the gentle stirring deep inside of you
You are the love of my life, my meadow soprano happily singing
Singing with the whispers of dawn, with each sunrise our hearts will sing
Sing with me loves sweet miracle, my sweet love, everyday…
Everyday…sweet angel, we’ll be joined together in romantic matrimony…

I’ll love you…everyday
Everyday…
Everyday…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-04-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-04 09:07 PM


I'll dance with you, sing with you, sing to you, anything your precious heart desires!
Well-done baby. You are my inspiration.

love,
Joanna

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2 posted 2001-12-04 10:30 PM


Looks like your sweetheart is lucky to have a man! How beautiful!

^_^ LadySofia

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3 posted 2001-12-05 01:44 PM


Noah,this was so romantic.   

Juanita

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4 posted 2001-12-05 02:22 PM


Full of romance.Very nice job!
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5 posted 2001-12-05 02:35 PM


good job Noah!

Kathleen (Kay)
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6 posted 2001-12-05 02:39 PM


Now that's what I call forever.  Well done, Noah!
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7 posted 2001-12-05 03:16 PM


Aw crikey friend, a very nice job indeed.  I love the for you used for this poem, it was very interesting.  Much heart-felt emotion included, i felt every word.

  From your good friend

        Randy Meador  

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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8 posted 2001-12-05 04:26 PM


Nice expression of romantic thoughts Noah...James
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9 posted 2001-12-05 04:40 PM


Ah sweet Noah!  Romantic as can be....as always!
~hugs, Nancy~

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10 posted 2001-12-05 05:51 PM


Beautifully done, Noah.
Sandra

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