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Double Serpentine Blend
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Double Serpentine Blend |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Double Serpentine Blend ~*Marge Tindal*~ Around the perimeter ... Perimeter of you I step Perimeter of measured step ... Step so lightly in the footprints Step the footprints of you ... Footprints to bring me back to you You left prints for me to follow ... You traversed them so expertly Follow I will ... Expertly I will find Will find my way ... Find my way Way to you~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very clever work here Marge...written sort of the way I think at times...I'm gonna have to check out some of these challenges of yours, as serenity remains, "un-a-mused"... Have missed you much.  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW I just say WOW Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Interesting and clever, Enjoyed *L* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl sweet sister of my heart, I'm awed, and amazed, this is truly outstanding, truly darling it's not just a clever bit of work, it really is something else.   Love and warm stuff as always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh for gosh' sake, if you make this a challenge, I shall come to Florida and hog-tie you to a stake and call the 'gators... you want me to Christmas shop, bake, plan, schedule, ring bells AND work on a double serpentine? I'm not going to do it! I'm NOT going to do it...I'm not...where's my pen? |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
This reminded me of that picture of a man carrying a child along a sandy beach, with reference to Jesus. Nicely done! ^_^ LadySofia |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... So clever! So talented! Wonderful. Please don't make me try to write one! I don't think I could do it justice the way you do. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." -Winnie-the-Pooh [This message has been edited by Bec (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ LOL ... it isn't a 'challenge' ... just a form I'm enjoying~ The 'challenge contest' is a go until Saturday, Dec. 8 at midnight~ *Hugs* gal~ Titia~ Thank you sweet lady~ Now SEE what you've got me doing ! I am soooooo thankful for your inspiration and introduction to this style~ Seymour~ Thank you sweet poet friend~ MarshaLove~ Just 'playing' with a little style of thought~ Thanks always for your loyal reads. Karilea~ LOL ~ If I thought it would REALLY get you to Florida ... I'd turn it into a challenge in a heartbeat~ As is stands ... it's only a challenge to myself perpetuated by a reply from MirrorMan on my 'Encircle Me' piece~  BUT ... go ahead and grab that pen ! !  LadySofia~ One of the things I enjoy most about sharing poetry is the 'interpretation' of it by so many~ Thank you for the read and reply~ Bec~ Girlfriend ... you're safe ... but, iffen you just 'had' to try it ... I'd be glad to read it~ *giggles* Love ya' *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Marge! Wonderful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well now, double serpentine - seems I've heard that name before...hows it work? Love the way you did this Marge... jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Double Serpentine? Is that a fancy word for a split personality? Or a splitting headache? Cause Im thinking thats a Tylenol challenge  BUT HEY ...anything with ellipses in it is WAY COOL by me and of course you made this look easy. very clever Margie  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! STANDING OVATION!!! WOW, I LOVE THIS FORM!!! (big hugggssssss) This is sooooooo creative and beautiful, I love it! (smiles) I wrote a serpentine yesterday titled "Everyday" too; this double serpentine is marvelous! BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) You always amaze with your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, hon~ JWesley~ Thank you~ Drop into the Poetry Workshop Forum for lessons on this form~ JanetMarie~ Just one of those $1.98 words that makes some purty poetry~  Thankee, gal~ Noah~ Thanks ever so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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