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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-12-04 07:26 PM




quiet evening
drops of rain against window
nature's music heard

reflection of flames
dancing shadows on the wall
woodstove burning warm

not another sound
even the birds stopped singing
all listening to the rain


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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1 posted 2001-12-04 07:30 PM


I hear this rainsong
it ticks against my windows
whispers of the rain


Beautifully done Titia

((hugs))
Charisma

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2 posted 2001-12-04 07:49 PM


I love the sound of the rain Titia, and you tell of it well (even the birds are quiet)!  Nicely done.

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3 posted 2001-12-04 08:50 PM




(sigh) Oh Titia, these are sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) This sparrow happily twitters hearing the rain sigh in your lovely words! (sigh) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so beautiful to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-04 09:02 PM



Southern winds blowing
Spring comes to December plains
Who knows what follows...

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5 posted 2001-12-04 10:19 PM


I'm waiting for rain also, Titia, right now everything seems so very far away, even the rain.  Everything in this poem touched me.
We're having what they call "Indian summer" here in Indianapolis and it's calm. A good time of the year for change, I suppose.
So glad to see you and read your thoughts tonight....

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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6 posted 2001-12-04 10:27 PM


Ah, the beautiful silence of rain! Simple and sweet.

^_^ LadySofia

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7 posted 2001-12-04 10:41 PM


Your words create a wonderful and calming mood, Titia  
Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2001-12-08 04:13 PM


Thanks friends, it just came up sitting here.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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