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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-12-04 03:20 PM


‘Tis hard to write.
I find tears
Refracting.
‘Tis not manly say you?
Then stand before me
And repeat the charge.
I shall parry,
Thrust,
And skewer
With my
Quill!
I, poet,
Romantic,
Have felt love
Strike
To the core
Of me.
Nay,
Not sensual love,
Rather unselfish,
Heartfelt
Love.
‘Twas found upon
Every page
herein.
What name
This giver of love?
The name is legion.
Therefore,
Call this giver
Passions’ Poets.



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 12-04-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-04 03:27 PM


*sigh* a stunning poem that comes from the very core of your heart. Tears are for all, dear man, who feel as deeply as poets do. Your poetic soul shines brightly on these blue pages bringing sighs to our lips and soft feelings to our heart. Passion's Poets have the very same affect on me and you are chief among the romantic poets that do. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-12-04 03:29 PM


InterLoper~
What a lovely piece~
YOU are poet !  YOU are friend !

'unselfish,
Heartfelt
Love.
‘Twas found upon
Every page
herein.'


You write with such beautiful touching feeling~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-12-04 03:39 PM


Flack attack?

Each time I post
I search for your reply,
for I know it shall please
my inner eye,
for a reply from you
is like fresh morning dew
and the sweetest rosebud
put into my hand,
thanks to you.

Thank you, Interloper.

        



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with you
4 posted 2001-12-04 03:42 PM




this is wonderful
just
like
you

Parker
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5 posted 2001-12-04 03:47 PM


Interloper, amazing write. My favorite style.  
Bravo.  

Parker

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6 posted 2001-12-04 04:15 PM


This is so heart warming, you wrote this with all of your loving heart, and we all apreciate you so much.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-12-04 04:23 PM


Hidden in this testimony to the Poets At PiP is a testament to you...to your ability to find the love in the words written here. Excellent poem sir.  
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8 posted 2001-12-04 05:54 PM


Interloper...
Sighhhhhh this poem is truly wonderful dearFriend
*~coco~*

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-12-04 06:06 PM



Whenever I see your name on the blue pages here
I have to pop in just to see your writings my dear
And this time I found a real beauty from your heart
Ahhh, may our friendship and passion for poetry never part

Titia

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10 posted 2001-12-04 06:21 PM


ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL MY FRIEND

Charisma
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11 posted 2001-12-04 07:02 PM


You write awesome....like it dear POET!

(((Hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

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12 posted 2001-12-04 09:13 PM


Interloper, tis wonderful, a real beauty


Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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13 posted 2001-12-04 09:36 PM


We do have a wide variety of emotions on every page, don't we?  Normal, I think, for a family this size and this diverse. Fortunately, to everyone's credit, love and respect always prevail in the end....that's what counts.
Sven
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14 posted 2001-12-04 10:45 PM


all I can say, oh Great Voice of the Southland is. . . thank you. . .  

well done. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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15 posted 2001-12-05 06:57 AM


Interloper... I'm sure that the person you wrote this for will know that they are very special to you. And they are very lucky to have a special person like you in their life, as we all are.

Bec  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

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Deep in the heart
16 posted 2001-12-05 10:56 AM


Bec ~
Why, this is for you, too  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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17 posted 2001-12-05 11:02 AM



A place for every poet,
a poet in every place
this is what I say to you
by pen, or face to face...

Enjoyed, and well done!

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18 posted 2001-12-05 01:21 PM


Now, you know maybe they don't know (ha ha)
don't mind me, I'm supposed to be at a retreat center but they were overbooked!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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19 posted 2001-12-05 03:51 PM


I could tell this came from the heart.Very Nice!

Juanita

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20 posted 2001-12-05 03:56 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (smiles) Your words always bring inspiration and smiles to us all, as do your words reflect all the magic of what Passions is! (big huggsssssss) I love it, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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21 posted 2001-12-05 04:17 PM


   ....Exquisite....

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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