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Aquamarine eyes

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bsquirrel
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Aquamarine,
with yellow rings like arms of the sun.
Pupils like sea-coal, sea-cold glass.
A waveless ocean, its shore of lashes.

My fingers teasing your irises open.
To be consumed, subsumed by your sight.
To dance like tears on the lens.
To swim from corner to corner and back.

A cold penny in the night.
Venus, the moon, Neptune's ice.
Jupiter's storm, Saturn's rings.
Aquamarine.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 12-04-2001).]

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*sigh* romantically beautiful. Tender moments shared in a gentle poem. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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BSquirrel~

Exquisite imagery~

'A cold penny in the night.
Venus, the moon, Neptune's ice.
Jupiter's storm, Saturn's rings.
Aquamarine.'


My, how I enjoyed this !
Good to see you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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(smiles) Awwwwwww, such sweet and surreal romance fill all your tender beautiful words! (sigh) May her sweet aquamarine eyes forever reflect eternal heaven of love to your heart! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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soooooooooooo good to have you back.  
This is beautiful.  
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Aquamarine,
with yellow rings like arms of the sun.
Pupils like sea-coal, sea-cold glass.
A waveless ocean, its shore of lashes.
===================================
A cold penny in the night.
Venus, the moon, Neptune's ice.
Jupiter's storm, Saturn's rings.
Aquamarine.
===================================

my brown eyes read this several times  
now Im smiling at you with poetic respect.
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 12-04-2001 05:12 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

It's wonderful to read you again Mike. Beautifully descriptive and flowing, very much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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dug the skyeye view of this as well as the romantic flavors

n-joyed
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My green eyes twinkled as I read this! Beautifully written
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Mike...I've always been a fan, but have been reading, and MY but your work has grown!

This is just gorgeous imagery...you continue to amaze and make me think! love to you!
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10 posted 12-05-2001 12:55 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thanks.

Mike
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This is the sort of writing that makes one yearn to have yourself be the subject. I found myself comparing the colors to my own eyes, splashed with the images of a thousand mornings.

What intricate and beautiful design! You've left me with daydreams enough to fill the whole of my afternoon. Thank you.
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Beautifully done!  
Makes one wonder about the person with such eyes.
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Beautiful...truly enjoyed this one!  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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14 posted 05-01-2002 08:39 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Glad y' all enjoyed.
 
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