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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-12-04 08:27 AM


         Haiku

Friendship, rose of whiff
Emanates the sweet of sniff
Dethroned of the ifs.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-12-04 08:34 AM


Sy,
I like this but what if...

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2001-12-04 08:36 AM




(big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! I love it! Friendship is about smiles and laughs and tears and love, never ifs! (smiles) I love it, you are a true loving friend to us all! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-12-04 09:07 AM


thanks for the  

regards,
sudhir

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-12-04 09:12 AM



Crowned King Royal
readers remaining loyal
Scepter is thy word

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-12-04 09:35 AM


Kethry,
What if? Then your a stiff. LOL *L*

Misstle,
Then I send you my rose.

Sudhir,
We exchange roses.

Sunshine,
Then with this scepter I give you my rose. *L*

SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-12-04 10:16 AM


Seymour, this is a beautiful haiku. You do these so well.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-12-04 10:58 AM


SmartChick,
That puts you on my rose list. *L*

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-12-04 11:34 AM


Friendship, heart's bouquet
Butterfly garden in sway
Loneliness gone away


~*~



~*~

Friendship, plants a seed
In a heart's garden, trust feeds
Here there are no weeds


~*~



  

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-12-04 01:18 PM


Jm,
And you already have my rose. Randy Stinky

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