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After The Loving
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After The Loving |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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After The Loving ~*Marge Tindal*~ You love me so neatly so very completely Is it any wonder that after the loving I love you even more than before Holding on, not letting go loving you so After the loving I want to love you again giving back one on one holding and enfolding the essence of you~ How can it be that each and every time you make me adore you loving me~ me loving you ... more~ Smiling with 'big love' for you~ December 4, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
After the loving is all that what starts loving even more  regards to you, Marge, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I LOVE YOU TOO! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl Darling sister of my heart, I love this, it is soooooooo true, and I know just how you feel.  Mmmmmmmm delicious isn't it.Another of your perfectly poetical pieces Margie girl absolutely fabulous     Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And we all love you so much too! (kiss on cheek) You bring sunshine to us all the time and we adore you for the loving and beautiful friend you are to us all! (sigh) Soooooooo pretty your words sing! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, sounds like a fabulous weekend, hmmm You loving me, me loving you...more. Perfect sentiment and perfectly penned. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Sounds good to me. Hugs & Kisses. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very well written, Marge - I love the way you kept the sentiment absolutely consistent throughout the poem. There weren't any "ya, buts" in there at all. Very well written. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful love poem, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thank you so very, very much~ MidniteSun~ *hugs* coming your way~ MarshaLove~ YES ... delicious just about sums it up~ Now ... you know we share the 'MUSHY' name~  Noah~ Thank you~ Kethry~ Yeppers it was quite beautiful~ Thanks, gal~ Seymour~ Tee-Hee ! Me too~  LongJohn~ Awwwwww, thanks big guy~ No room for 'ya, buts' in my vocabulary~ SmartChick~ Thank you ... that's just exactly what it is~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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