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Justbleu
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0 posted 2001-12-04 01:28 AM


No more shady spots
For me to hide
My thoughts away
Tucked where no one
Would ever know

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Eyelids fade
Slumber proceeds
Visions of wonder
Breathe me away
Twirl me keep me
Whisper softly

© Copyright 2001 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Bec
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Canberra
1 posted 2001-12-04 01:32 AM


Justbleu... Just like a lullaby for a baby. Simple, but beautiful.

Bec  

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Duncan
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2 posted 2001-12-04 01:34 AM


The first...exposing.  The second...comforting.  Enjoyed them both.
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3 posted 2001-12-04 02:10 AM


JustBleu~
SO GOOD to see you~
Hope all is well in your little corner of this big ole world~

Delightfully delicate read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Larry C
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4 posted 2001-12-05 12:43 PM


Justbleu,
Nice. I enjoyed.  

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