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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Senseless If it were not for your eyes the things that I would have never seen tears of joy, tears of sadness the lows and the highs contentment, contemptment and all in-between If it were not for your touch the things that I would have never felt your warmth, your coldness little or much sharing, caring other things life is about If it were not for your lips the things that I would have never tasted a slip of the tongue fear that grips a love that is fulfilling or a moment that is wasted If it were not for your voice the things that I would have never heard determination, uncertainty by chance or by choice strength, weakness, taken or given, just say the word If it were not for your fragrance the things that would be meaningless memories would have been nonsense and all else would be senseless |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Craig! I love this! What an incredible write. WOW! Very thought provoking and very beautiful. ...Oh YES...I enjoyed this! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!This is incredible and so powerful. Such sensual romance. Absolutely stunning, Craig. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
It's amazing all the things someone can cause us to feel! Craig, this is simply wonderful my friend! ((hugs)) |
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Ocean Beauty Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 18VT, USA |
Craig, The way you write gives me goosebumps everytime. Can't wait to read more!!  ~Hugz~ Dawn |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Absolutely beautiful!!!! I would love to have some of your poetry on my website. Please get in touch with me if you are interseted! I thought this was so good in fact I called my sister up on the phone and told her to check it out. DO NOT PUT THAT PEN DOWN |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
I liked the alusion to the senses a positive view to see anything that crosses our paths. As something positive i likes a lot xoxo |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Well ... this was unexpected. I wasn't sure of the response but didn't expect as such. Thank you!! Nancy - happy to see you enjoyed! < Karen - my ... such colorful comments! TY RP - Yes, amazing and yet sometimes thoughtless. TY my friend! Dawn - Giving you "goosebumps" is a well-sought pleasure! I hope to see more of your work as well. Tim's Angel - glad to see your excitement overflowed to your sister, I hope she liked it as well. ~~~ We will see about the site Crazy - you have to look at things with both eyes to see all sides glad you likes!! [This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If it were not for your eyes the things that I would have never seen tears of joy, tears of sadness the lows and the highs contentment, contemptment and all in-between If it were not for your touch the things that I would have never felt your warmth, your coldness little or much sharing, caring other things life is about ============================== this is superb writing... clever rhyme scheme ... internal rhyme laced through, alliterations..impressive use of poetic phrasing and anology with the senses and emotions. excellent poetry. jm |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, I agree with all of the others, this is wonderful. Sandra |
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