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Brief, brief candle!
It was out I supposed.
But after the incense faded,
I still saw the candle-
standing...with a little light on.
That light proved my love- not
only toward the scent
but also to the beauty I've found
when I sliced it in half.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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wow....Lizzy, I love this...you are a very talented poetess  
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(smiles) Your candle of your heart will forever glow with love and hope as your smile brightens! (sigh) Your words are soooooo beautiful, I love them all! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lizzy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Excellent write Lizzy!  Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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Enjoyed...James
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