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Butterscotch Sky Margie girl's challenge
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Butterscotch Sky Margie girl's challenge |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~ Butterscotch Sky ~ Margie girl’s title is a Butterscotch sky It brings all manner of images to my eye I can visualise it all quite clearly The sugar sweet pictures of my fantasy Beneath a butterscotch sky of toffee hue I wander beside the lake with you This lake is filled up with chocolate milk As smooth on my tongue as liquid silk Under that open butterscotch sky No worries or troubles cause me to sigh I float along on a cloud of toffee cream Then sink my teeth into this chocolate dream The flowers in this magical place delight They are lollies flavoured with sunlight The grass beneath me is green coconut ice And over there are some marshmallow mice Beneath butterscotch sky I wander free There’s nothing but joy in this fantasy There’s a hint of peppermint in the air This is a heavenly haven for us to share The rainbow that arches over my head Scatters sweeties coloured yellow and red There’s a gingerbread house in ice cream lane And the windows are chocolate milk and plain Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Looks like the Gingerbread Man's house doesn't stand a plum pudding of a chance... Where's Willie Wonka when you need him?  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
mmmmmmmmmmm now I need something sweet.......hey where the heck is Balladeer?!  Mushy, this is fantastic! Challenge well met!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, a colored confection of purest delight but if you'd eaten all that you'd be sick half the night enough sweetest wonder to draw me again to overindulgence that would give me a pain Marsha my Mushy your sweetness is sure though I'.d rather the chocolate was not milked but pure and the hint of the best that's yet to come I'll have my coffee flavoured with rum Beautiful~ and sweet! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo delicious and beautiful, sweet Marsha! Mmmmmmm...I'm going to step this way into Ginger Bread Lane and climb the butterscotch pyramids! (smiles) Mmmmmmm...yummy and gorgeous your visions always are, just as you have such a sweet heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
mushy...this poem is just like you...YUMMY!  Wonderful work, English muffin SEA.....I'M HERE! I'M HERE! I'M HERE!!!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ This is so gosh-darned gorgeous ! !  Me lika beary mush~  Love to you sweet girlie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet and special. Just delicious in every way. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, I'll have a portion of that. *L* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This was very well done. Such a beautiful poem it is. |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
entirely sweet! Carol Luna |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling girl, sumptuous isn't it, you just wait on the 12th the poem will be a pyrotecnical extravaganza. And darling girl I shall expect suitable recompense.   Love and warm stuff as always Puck   My computer is playing up I'll be back xxx To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Yum!!!!!!! This made me so hungry, Marsha... When do we eat. It was beautifully written and I love what you did with the different colors....that was really  I don't yet know how to work the fonts so I can get them into different sizes etc... But I love the way you do it. Lyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl thank you, it is pretty isn’t it, Kari says I’m showing off, she’s right I am.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Keth darling sister of my soul, okay yes I admit it I am showing off. But only because I’m so pleased I finally got it fixed. Thank you for your assistance darling girl  Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  Noah darling boy thank you so much, and may love and light shine ever on you   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ‘Deer dear heart, Mmmmm is it delicious? Thank you. I know I’m showing off, but still I like to play and this really was just playing . Thank you muchly You can take a bite out of my gingerbread house anytime Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Margie girl, this is my playing about, I’m really pleased you like it but as I say it’s not a serious contender. Not with some so called friends outmatching me at every flick of their pens. I mention no names me, but the words perfidy and unfair advantage spring to mind. I really do want that book Okay I promise I won’t try bribery I know it won’t work Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Sandra darling girl thank you muchly As always Mushy ;clapping: Seymour my friend thank you so very very much As always Mushy SC thank you so much, that is a very sweet thing to say As always Mushy Carol Luna thank you soooooooo very much I really do appreciate it As always Mushy Lyra darling girl I’ll send you a crib sheet of how to’s that should help, however this was my first attempt at colour and size so I’m pleased. Which is the only reason it is here. It’s just me showing off. The real show off poem will appear on the 12th, that will be splendiferous. I know modest aren’t I? Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Marsha, A perfection of confection! Who needs a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, when the rainbow itself is the true prize. Can I be your candy man? Roger |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marsha- Wonderful job on this...love it. Now...I'm craving sweets..LOL Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Roger darling boy, I know you're a married spud, so I'll only let you be my sweet potato Darling boy, isn't it a good job you know me. Mmmmm of course Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Vicky thank you, this was me playing with colors. I'm glad it worked out. Now don't blame me for the sweet tooth, I'm addicted to Chocolate. MMmmmm delicious Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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