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Window Pain
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Window Pain |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Window Pain Tint of blue cold as glass sight unseen not to pass Life in full take a look dreams unleashed and wind-shook Rattle me tears the rain to weather certain pane See it all distant way window pain day to day Looking through keep an eye miss of you waved good-bye |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
" Good Rhythm, Good Poem " A Musician must make his Music, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very very nice! "Rattle me tears the rain to weather certain pane See it all distant way window pain day to day" I had to copy half the poem to highlight what I liked best.  A  for you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this play on words very much! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow, I love the way you presented this, as if visions are slipping down the windowpane like raindrops! (sigh) BRAVO!!! I always enjoy reading your words, sweet friend! (big huggggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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