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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-03 03:15 PM




Melt
By: Noah Eaton
1/16/01

Melt with me, my love
Let our hearts melt into one
Let us never feel lonely or shy again
When we are together as one, lying in earthly heaven

Melt into my eyes
I want to see you, I want to love you all my life
Hold me, take me, let me be by your side
May we forever be together, for all time

Melt into my dreams
Let us sleep at night peacefully
Happy knowing our searches are complete
As we are in each others arms, dreaming of each other, happily

Melt into my body
Embrace me with your soft warm body, attached to me
Let me feel the softness of your lips, the silkiness of your skin
Melt with me in the heat of our love, your heart and mine melting in romantic passion

Melt into my heart
Feeling comfortable that we’ll never again be apart
I love you, you are my dream…
Melt with me


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-03-2001).]

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PoetriPrincess
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1 posted 2001-12-03 03:20 PM


An honor being u're 1st post
u r quite the romantic also.
It's simply contagious  


A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
  ~ Abraham Maslo

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2 posted 2001-12-03 03:23 PM


"Melt into my heart"..

to be one in heart and soul is just a wonderful feeling, love can be so sweet.

Glad to see you happy my dear friend  

((Hugs))
Charisma

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3 posted 2001-12-03 03:24 PM


yup, that about sez it, yore romantical
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4 posted 2001-12-03 03:25 PM


Melting... just like m&m's. This is beautiful baby. ((hugs))

Joanna

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Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-12-03 03:28 PM


Noah, you are going to have to get over this shyness   teasing, this is nice.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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6 posted 2001-12-03 05:19 PM


enjoyed
Suetang
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7 posted 2001-12-03 06:28 PM


Being a hopeless romantic, I too melted as I read your words of love and longing.  Simply stunning, Noah!  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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