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PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

0 posted 2001-12-03 02:45 PM

When the sun sets, in the far West
of the horizon
then the avid moon- which was vivid
in the daylight, is to the left of me

Drew me to looking upward
at each star
as they acclaim each other, in the sky
and, accentuate the glow of the moon.

Apt, in its fullness
apropos, in the abeyance of noise and wind
to bestow,
the beauty, of the night

Such blandishment, beauty, and bliss
that could reminisce
a balm;
as was, its bracing coolness

Was a night, I could not resist
the Beauty of the Eve.
Then approached,
a shadow of light

That gave way-
to the shining sunrise
bidding farewell;
to yesterdays, beautiful
Beauty of Night.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-03 03:19 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful! I love the night, and looking at the moon and dreaming of the stars, as tomorrow brings new hopes and dreams and promises! I love it!!! (smiles) Your words are always so beautiful, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet princess, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

2 posted 2001-12-03 03:28 PM

How well you brandish your vocabulary. I love you thoughts and the flow thereof!

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-03 03:29 PM

Sarah, this is really beautiful, with unique moon imagery.

"Apt, in its fullness
apropos, in the abeyance of noise and wind
to bestow,
the beauty, of the night"

Bravo!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-12-03 03:54 PM

PoetriPrincess - you have a most beautiful unique way with words...

BC

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

5 posted 2001-12-04 05:54 PM

This is very good. I like all of it. Very good.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-12-04 06:24 PM

I agree with Mistletoe Angel, I love to lay in the grass and look up at the moon and stars. It's relaxing and a beautiful sight.
This is a great poem Princess!

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