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Open Poetry #17

Tactile scenery

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

0 posted 2001-12-03 02:08 PM

tactile scenery
interpreted by my mind
desiring input
~*~
dewdrops beading up
silken skin soaked in moisture
passion's evidence
~*~
senses exploding
ecstacy invades body
all has been given

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-12-03 03:18 PM

this is absolutely perfect! Beautiful imagery, great flow, and the presentation is outstanding. A keeper for my favorites. Thanks for sharing this gem.

PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

2 posted 2001-12-03 03:41 PM

Beautiful 2 read

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
~ Abraham Maslo

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-12-03 04:08 PM

mind lost on the road
passion takes away the map
bodies feel their way
~*~

hands search for landmarks
as mouths whisper directions
passion burns the map

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