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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-12-03 01:59 PM


The day that you left
it broke this beating heart in two
into shambles my life fell,
it was so hard being without you.
Knowing that what you did,
you did for the "we"
still didn't help to ease the pain
that flowed constant inside of me.
Now the circle has been completed,
once again my soul has soared.
I cry tears of welcome home
as I whisper "Thank you Lord."


(I love you baby, welcome home...   )



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 12-03-2001).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-12-03 02:39 PM


Big smiles here....
We're happy youre so happy  
Christmas came early huh?  

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-12-03 02:39 PM


Well I am happy that your love has returned home to you. I just love happy endings. (hugs)

RP

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-12-03 02:41 PM


Gentle,
Nice Enjoyed.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-12-03 02:43 PM



GS...this can go as well for a man and wife, both finding their way...

to a serviceman, being either husband or son...or even daughter...

Thank you!

Charisma
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5 posted 2001-12-03 03:06 PM


this one moved my heart very much....and I am so happy for you  
thanks for sharing

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

texasrose
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6 posted 2001-12-05 05:57 AM


It is good to see that the circle has remained unbroken.  I know how happy you are. *big smiles*
rwood
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7 posted 2001-12-05 07:45 AM


What a wonderful day! What a wonderful thing to know you are free to soar again. Big circles, big smiles, big hugs!!! Your muse is overflowing...thanks for that!!~somy


Sincerely,
Regina

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2001-12-05 08:41 PM


I can not thank you all enough.  It was truly a wonderful day this day!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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