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mirror man
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0 posted 2001-12-03 01:42 PM












dance


So you want to dance.
I don't know what to say.
Dancing is not my forte.
Nor holding hands.
Nor romance.

We try,
but only the variety
papier mâché.
Yes, reversion
is the order of the day.
And we have something for you.

Dance.

text and music by mirror man
copyright 2001




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for more music.
A trip to my music page
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PoetriPrincess
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1 posted 2001-12-03 02:03 PM


Nice.

Look I'm Dancing, I'm Dancing!


A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
     ~ Abraham Ma

[This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (edited 12-03-2001).]

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-12-03 02:32 PM


Mirror Man,

I hope you dance with the lady, jut follow her lead, women love a slow dance.
I know I do, but I wont ask you for this dance because you might say no, hehe.

Charisma
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3 posted 2001-12-03 03:37 PM


yes I like to dance.....and I do love holding hands and romance too....



Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-12-03 05:06 PM


very original, thanks for an interesting treat!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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5 posted 2001-12-03 05:09 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love the way this is presented, I've always wanted to put music with my poems! (smiles) Once you take her hand, she will want to dance the waltz of love eternally! (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! I love it!!! Your words are always so beautifully whimsical and lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet mirror man, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mirror man
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6 posted 2001-12-03 11:18 PM


PoetriPrincess -- I'm glad you like it.  Just don't hurt yourself.  (and where is Calvin?  I've always wondered that.)

RosePetal -- I wouldn't say no.  But you would definitely have to lead, especially a slow dance.  However, this is a hop.  And the lady is hopping.  Do you know the hop?

Charisma -- Thank you.

Kay -- Thank you also.

Noah -- Thank you.  If you just want to add music to your poetry, add the following code to the top of your poem when you post:

bgsound src="http://www.(your site).com/(your song).mid"

embed src="http://www.(your site).com/(your song).mid" align="baseline" border="0" width="0" height="0" loop="false"

You have to add brackets around the first and second lines.  The site here won't let me put them here (it thinks it's real).
Substitute the words "your site" for the location you wish to link to, and substitute the words "your song" for the song you wish to use.  Likewise, if you wish to link to an  extension other than .com, (.org, .net, for example) change that too.
The file, in this case, must be a midi.  And the site where your midi is located must be enabled for remote accessing.  

This, of course, assumes you have a midi to post.  There are many sites on the web that will allow you to link to their files.  If you want to use one of my songs, click on the link I've included in my poem.  All my music is posted there.  If you find something you like, email me.

To all: this goes for everyone.  All my music is share enabled.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 12-05-2001).]

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