Thinking The Time...........

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-12-03 10:54 AM

Thinking the time of love,
The love was taken.....
The time of love,
The time of memories,
The memories of love,
That were shared by us,
Taking back to those days,
Now those days were taken,
When we only knew
which way to,
Thinking the time,
when we used to be together,
Thinking of the day
where the thunder used to
strike a lighting
on a window,
And we used to stand
and watch the rain,
Now It seems so far away,
Even the time has taken the memories,
Thinking the time of the day,
Where we used to laugh and cried,
Thinking of the way
we used to tried,
To be strong,
And the things never seems wrong,
Now It seems like
thinking the time,
Thinking harder,
Each day,
Days were our side,
Now It's like our love has hidden
by the clouds,
So I sit down today,
and write few words of long ago
that linger on my mind
Thinking the time
when we will be together again,
Looking at the clock running by
and thinking the time will go by fast
Thinking how the time has taken my love away
Thinking the time......

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 12-03-2001).]

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-12-03 11:12 AM

quite sad...

but this poem has an arresting flow to it... the flow arrests the reader...

regards,
sudhir

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-12-03 11:37 AM

Very nice.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-03 03:25 PM

I love it. It makes you stop and enjoy this very moment in time. Very well done, Vandana. Have a peaceful day filled with times of good memories.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-12-03 03:34 PM

I enjoyed it very much!

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-03 04:23 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so sad but beautiful! (sad sigh) Your heart may be without love now, but soon you will hold true love close again and forever, and you will be happy ever after! (sigh) I wish you the greatest joy, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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