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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-12-03 10:32 AM


Lost my Muse

I lost my muse somewhere
I looked all over the place
But couldn't find her anywhere
No single word these days
I whisper and invite
And hope that my muse
Finds her way back inside
Sharing my blues


I have lost my muse lately
Haven't seen her for days
I miss her teasing whim
For words or eloquent phrase
The impulse of my own hymn
Reflection of my inner whole
Oh muse I miss you so
Mirror of my soul

~*TMP*~
16/11/01

~*Theresia~*

© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-03 10:35 AM


Hey, I lost mine too, try writing from another viewpoint, it's exhiliating!!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Joe Lamando
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2 posted 2001-12-03 10:48 AM


Oh yes, I know the feelig!

Try putting on some of her favorite music
and writing her a letter asking
for a bit of her advise.

My Muse usually gets impatient
with my efforts at poetry
and jumps in with a
"Here, let me do it!"

Joe

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3 posted 2001-12-03 12:26 PM


Good comment from Irish Rose. But Joe's had me laughing and pushed me into this one, just for you:

   Just let that muse
   grab that quill
   and do whatever
   with it she will.
   Don't look back
   and don't regret,
   it is your quill,
   Muse won't forget.


Joe Lamando
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4 posted 2001-12-03 01:58 PM


Speaking of quills, I'm posting Feather Quill.
It's about getting down to writing and finishing things.
It helped me to get off the stick and get my stuff together

Charisma
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5 posted 2001-12-03 02:41 PM


Irish Rose: yeah maybe you're right, i'd already tried to do that, but well my muse is soooooo pig-headed, I will tell her about your idea  

Joe: ohhhhh that's what I have done wrong
I didn't play her favorite song
and didn't wrote her an asking letter
do you really think, if it makes her feel better??

*lol* glad you jumped in to let me know how to solve my problem thank you!  

Midnitesun: yeah Joe's had me laughing too, and isn't it great when someone inspired you to write something....thank you for sharing  

Joe: Seems that I must seek no further, so on my way to "Feather Quill"  



PoetriPrincess
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6 posted 2001-12-03 02:53 PM


" I can relate, I think we all can.
I really liked this Charisma,
Many Snaps from me

Keep Writing & I'll Keep Reading

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
  ~ Abraham Maslo

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7 posted 2001-12-03 03:08 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Charisma, I know this feeling so very well too! (sigh) Your muse will always be with you, and have you dreaming and writing down the sweet words your lovely heart always expresses! (smiles) I always love your words, they're so enchanting and meaningful! (kiss on cheek) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2001-12-03 03:57 PM


Charisma - your muse is still with you, this I know. And it will return...

BC

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