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WhiteKnight
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0 posted 2001-12-03 08:41 AM


I heard a quote once...  "No body's perfect...   Until you love them."  


Perfection
by Cor

Perfection just a reflection?
Minds through time have analyzed this perplextion
exactly what is perfection?

Long and hard they thought
the absence of all wrong?
being really strong?
making no error?
having no terror?

The search goes on
always will
It is the fool who can see
yet refuses to look
thinks it's all in a book

Perfection is everywhere
has nothing to do with hair
'tis the love in the air

Perfection is perception
I Love my children
they are perfect
even when they're not
even if we're apart
The love in my hart makes them so

Perfection is not your beautiful brown hair
Nor your wondrous eyes
where I can lose myself in my joy
nor is it your shinning smile
which lifts my hart above the clouds

Perfection is none of these things on their own
it is the joy in my hart
just knowing that you exist
knowing your mind and feelings
knowing your kiss

Perfection is not in a person
it is in the love others have for them



© Copyright 2001 Corey Rugar - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-12-03 08:58 AM


White,
All and none of these. Enjoyed

Mon Cherie
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2 posted 2001-12-03 09:45 AM


I like the way this whole thing is summed up with a simple

Perfection is not in a person
it is in the love others have for them

This is just great!  

Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-03 10:48 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!How very true it is.   magnificent. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal
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4 posted 2001-12-03 11:26 PM


I once heard a quote.."If practice makes perfect and nobody's perfect then why practice"? I aree with you though, it is in the love you have for others!
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