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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-03 06:29 AM



My heart lays dormant, faint and weak
Unsure of much, afraid to seek
Not true to self when care began
Where lays love, where hides the man?  

Though strong in will and strong in way
The hope once held just falls away
I question self and life and fate
But more days pass; do lovers wait?

Alone among the many, who everyday I see
Working for the dollar, but me not really me
Awaiting time of calling, the time that many seek
When love as sirens singing unto my heart does speak

© Copyright 2001 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
1 posted 2001-12-03 06:33 AM


it is there. we do wait. it will come. washing over all you ever knew. Sublime.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2001-12-03 06:38 AM


Hi Regina, nice to read your reply, I am sitting here just quietly contemplating life and love.
Sincerely
Rick

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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OK, USA
3 posted 2001-12-03 10:21 AM


It is there and you will recieve it.Saturating your whole being.I hope soon.
Peaches

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
4 posted 2001-12-03 07:17 PM


*sigh* the call of your heart goes out with sweet music to the all who are blessed to read this poem. I know the questioning and the fear that comes with it. I hope and pray that love will reach out and find you that two hearts may sing in unison. **hugs** Your love would be a priceless treasure for any woman to have.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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