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{{{A cross a field of Lilacs spread (Marge's challange) }}}

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MyEnchanted_Melody
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~*~ A cross a field of lilacs spread ~*~


Across a field of Lilacs spread
I saw you there
A lady so fair
A spirit full of love
Full of care

And there was my beginning
My breath started
And pray that my ending
Would be somewhere within you

Lilacs ..
Lady…
With shades of purple
I gave you…
A bouquet of my own feelings
I handed you

You took them and walked away
And I stood wondering
If you knew what do they say

The purple lilacs in your hand
I pray that you understand
The words written on their
Every tiny petal
How these petals stir
And shiver
As they try to say
The message I enclosed in
them forever
The feelings my heart
Wants to send your way

Purple
Lady
Is a lofty color
But in Lilacs
The message it carries
Is softer than any other
It speaks
Of “the first warm stirrings of love”
That my heart is fluttering like a dove
The moment you came my way
And I lost all the powers to say

Gentle lady…
Fair maid…
Come across this field of lilacs spread
Acknowledge this love of me
Fluttering in its bed

Look at me….
And don’t walk heedlessly
Never turning back to see
The soul of me
Standing there
Stripped of its mystery
Waiting for every moment to share
Share it with you
As you are clad in this soft
Enchanting hue


Remember
As you carry those soft purple lilacs
In your arms
That they are in fact relics
Of  the soul
That gave them
And the secret confession
They tell
As they shiver
In their flowery cell

Look closely at them for a moment
And remember
The look in my eyes
As I handed them to you
Remember
The shivering of my hands
As they touched
The hand of you
And remember
The message
Of these lilacs
And their purple hue.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you



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Denise
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1 posted 12-02-2001 07:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful presentation, MyEnchanted_Melody!
Enchantress
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Lovely Melody.  Very nicely penned with a lovely pic as well.  Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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Melody, you have done a beautiful rendition here.
This part in particular stood out for me
"Remember
As you carry those soft purple lilacs
In your arms
That they are in fact relics
Of  the soul
That gave them
And the secret confession
They tell
As they shiver
In their flowery cell"

You write so beautifully.
Sandra

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4 posted 12-02-2001 08:27 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

This is a remarkable piece of work.  The presentation of this was lovely.
EagleScorpion
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5 posted 12-02-2001 09:16 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

the wonderful way this piece of art was presented does the poem much justice...
Lone Wolf
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What a lovely write, Melody.  Very well done.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful! I love it!!! Romance fills every breeze and color of this poem! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Hi there my dear MEM......

an amazing piece of art that it is ....my friend


I haven't had so much time to express the real joy I have been since the very beginnig when ur imaginary lines captured my whole senses....

each time I breathe ur ink which reflects ur outstanding soul,I gain that sort of  feeling which says.....MEM ur such incredible  poet which I'll always love and  be proud of......

MEM my dear and close pal,  keep up the good work and don't ever let ur pen disappear
MyEnchanted_Melody
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~Denise~

Thank you..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Nancy~

Thank you for your kind words..
Love & {{Hugs}}

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Sandra~

Dearest..I'm so glad that you loved it.

Thank you for your sweet words.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Eloise~

Thank you

I"m thrilled that you have enjoyed it..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~EagleScorpion~


I'm glad that you loved both the poem and the presentation.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Lone Wolf~

Thank you soooo dearly sweet friend

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Noah~

You are surely a sweet guy...and a sweet dear friend..

Thank you soooo much and here is a kiss on your cheek..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Romeo~

My dear friend...
I don't know how to thank you for your ever sweet encouraging words.....

God bless you....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Marge Tindal
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10 posted 12-03-2001 07:56 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MyEnchantedMelody~
Postitively awesome sentiments displayed here~
WOW, gal .... I'm impressed with this inspire of sheer beauty~
Thank you soooooo much for joining in with such a gorgeous piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SmartChick
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This is so beautiful! And the picture is too.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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~Marge~

Dearest and sweetest friend..

Wow....I'm so very glad that you loved it...

And million thanks to You for the wonerful challange...

{{{Hugs}}}
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Smart Chick~

Thank you so much for reading it..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Midnitesun
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Congratulations!
Virgo_Rains
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This is so very beautiful...I am speechless as to its lovliness...WOW  

VR
Justbleu
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Very pretty piece....I love the picture too!!!! All quite lovely!!!!  

Congratulations!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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16 posted 12-12-2001 11:36 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Look at me….
And don’t walk heedlessly
Never turning back to see
The soul of me
Standing there
Stripped of its mystery
Waiting for every moment to share
Share it with you
As you are clad in this soft
Enchanting hue"


all style and elegance here   loved this  
Titia Geertman
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Hai MyEnchanted_Melody

I missed yours before, but congratulations to you.

You wrote a true lovely poem.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

Earth Angel
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18 posted 07-05-2005 11:52 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

A peek into the past! Thanks for the link to this poem. Lilacs are my favourite flowers and this poem was simply gorgeous!


EA
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