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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-12-02 05:53 PM



Whispher in my ear
sweet nothings
that I love to hear
Come let me show you
my love
I'll take you
to a place where
we've been before
Where love does not ache
where love breathes
our scents
and nothing else matters
Let our love ascend
and in a cloud
shape like a heart
stay in heaven



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1 posted 2001-12-02 06:05 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) I envisioned a soft cloud shaped like a heart in the clouds, where you and your love rest! (sigh) I love it!!! May you forever find a true place of love in your hearts! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-12-02 10:53 PM


"And in a cloud shaped like a heart stay in heaven."
Like this...James

Mon Cherie
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3 posted 2001-12-03 10:53 AM


I'll take you
to a place where
we've been before
Where love does not ache
where love breathes
our scents
and nothing else matters

Does this place exist? If so, juz point me in the right direction, and I'll start off on a journey to find this place...  

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