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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-12-02 05:04 PM


So we're living on separate paths
longing to go the same direction
Still, the odds we can outlast
For no relationship is perfection

My love for you, an immesurable amount
I've gotten to know you inside
Where it truly counts
Often I'm left tongue tied

Wondering what the future holds for us
Will there be happiness awaiting?
A bond of mutual trust
Here I am anticipating

I long to be there when you awake
And greet you with good morning kiss
Happy moments we would make
I never felt love like this

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-02-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-02 05:06 PM


*sigh* Sweet!  
I love it!  
Just when we think we've been loved in every way, someone comes along and does it better.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-02 05:23 PM




(BIG KISS ON LIPS) Oh Joanna, I have faith in my heart that we will together, and our love will flourish on! (smiles) I love you so very much, and may our paths diverge in love! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet Joanna, you are all my heart desires! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-02 05:37 PM


Anticipation what the future holds is one of the best parts of being in love.
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4 posted 2001-12-02 05:45 PM


I hope it goes the way you want it too. Very nice..
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-12-02 06:00 PM


enjoy
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6 posted 2001-12-02 08:34 PM


My love for, an immesurable amount
I've gotten to know you inside
Where it truly counts
Often I'm left tongue tied
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arent the discoveries the most wonderful part...
after reading this cadenced kissed poem of promise...
its not hard to figure out why you have that lovely smile on your face  
Well done poetess Rose.
jm

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7 posted 2001-12-02 08:37 PM


This is sweet RosePetal.  
Tracey
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8 posted 2001-12-02 09:34 PM


The beginning of love is so sweet. This is wonderful Joanna

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Domzi
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9 posted 2001-12-03 05:08 PM


Joanna, you've been writing a lot of hits lately...and I'm liking them all!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-12-03 05:14 PM


Isn’t it wonderful to write something that you feel so strongly?
Enjoyed reading your thoughts.
Kathleen (Kay)
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11 posted 2001-12-03 06:36 PM


I do believe love is in the air

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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