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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-02 02:11 PM


Love Tankas (For My Dream Girl Joanna)
By: Noah Eaton
12/2/01


Kissing A Red Rose

Kissing a red rose
The heart of a sweet angel
Magically opens
Showering me with her love
Wreathing me in her petals


A True Love So Beautiful

She visits my dreams
A true love so beautiful
With emerald eyes
Sparkling like the heart of spring
Melting my heart with amore


Forever And Ever

Sweet love, hand in hand
We’ll roller-blade all our dreams
Kissing every star
Dreaming on a crescent moon
Loving you eternally

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-02-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-02 02:23 PM


Absolutely beautiful...she will love them, Noah...be prepared to catch her when she swoons.   **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-02 02:24 PM


Ah Noah, These are so precious!
Joanna will love them!
Well done my sweet friend.
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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3 posted 2001-12-02 03:31 PM


How very sweet is your love and willingness to sing it to the world for her. This is beautiful, Noah.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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4 posted 2001-12-02 04:39 PM


wow these are awesome noah. Thank you, thank you!!! (hugs) beautiful!!! your making me blush, hehe
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5 posted 2001-12-02 05:27 PM


You have a real talent for these.
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6 posted 2001-12-02 05:40 PM


Romantically beautiful.
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7 posted 2001-12-02 05:57 PM


How sweet!! These are lovely.    
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8 posted 2001-12-02 06:00 PM


I hope she knows how lucky she is Noah, to have such beautiful love songs written and sung to her.  Love, Joyce
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9 posted 2001-12-03 11:25 AM


They're ALL so sweet!! Especially Kissing a Red Rose  

_,,,^.^,,,_
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10 posted 2001-12-03 05:06 PM


Awww! Ain't that sweet! Your going to make me cry!

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11 posted 2001-12-04 02:39 AM


Soooo Sweet, I think I have a cavity.  
They are so endearing, She'll love em'

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
  ~ Abraham Maslo

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