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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-12-02 01:59 PM


Heartstrings wrapped around my soul
all tied up, nowhere to go
still feel ragged from this loss
loving held too high a cost.

Held by chains which won't release
yearning for some honest peace
knowledge of mistaken love
not removing heart pain of.

Vainly gripped by undertow
quicksand pulling downward slow
no respite for cornered mind
happiness so hard to find.

Many moons have passd me by
while I sat alone and cried
tired of this constant pain
want to live and love again.

Ties of past love; set me free
else there's nothing left of me.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 12-02-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-02 02:04 PM


*sigh* sweetie my heart hurts for you. I know it is so hard to lose love..but truly it is priceless and was once worth the cost. I hope and pray that someday, very soon, love will reach out to you and heal the pain you now feel so deeply. A man, a knight among men, who will capture your heart with the joy and tenderness of forever love...that is my dearest wish for you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-02 02:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, it saddens me so much to feel this constant sorrow in your heart! Love may not be with you right now, but in your golden heart, you will soon be embraced by true love that's worthy of your loving angelic heart! Always listen to your heart and believe in yourself, and you will find true happiness! I swear! (big hugggssssss) I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-12-02 02:09 PM


Cat,
There is always a new day. *L*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-12-02 02:20 PM


Sandra~You sound a little down today.  
Wish we lived closer. I would call you up and get you giggling.  (or we could watch 'Somewhere in Time' together and share a box of tissues!)    
Take care sweetie, better days are ahead.  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-12-02 02:38 PM


When we finally become weary of the constant pain that gives us the strength to move on...for how can we be ready to love another if we want to hold onto the past thinking our future could never outdo it...James
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-12-02 02:41 PM


no respite for cornered mind
happiness so hard to find.

Many moons have passd me by
while I sat alone and cried
tired of this constant pain
want to live and love again.

Ties of past love; set me free
else here's nothing left of me.
=======================================

so many lines in this touch in places deep...
sometimes our heart chains us to things our heads know we are better off free of.
A bittersweet-blue write of truth Sandra...
with every rhyme there is release.
well done poetess Cat
jm

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

Joe Lamando
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 124
Massachusetts,USA
7 posted 2001-12-02 02:49 PM


Very good, a heartfelt poem telling of the past. And now we need the tale of the ftutre
happiness
Joe Lamando

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
8 posted 2001-12-02 03:18 PM




This hurts truly........it has touched my heart so deeply...or is it just my mood?

Sandra....May you get over all these chains of pains..

Take care dearest..
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RosePetal
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9 posted 2001-12-02 05:12 PM


oh sandra, I know just how you feel.
There are times when I feel trapped too!
You're going to be just fine, and happiness is on your horizon. Hang in there sweets!

RP

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10 posted 2001-12-02 05:59 PM


Hang in there Sandra. Sometimes when you least expect it, love has a way of popping into your life. I so enjoyed this!  
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