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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-02 12:36 PM


Love's Power

It flowed into me
making my blood sing
melting me inside
as my heart took wing

It warmed my cold flesh
lighting desire
sending heat rushing
setting love's fire

It was so gentle
filled with feeling
its touch so tender
my senses realing

It told me so much
I could feel the heat
deep and caressing
my heart missed a beat

Sighing I listened
not missing a word
showing love's power
as your voice I heard

I opened my eyes
was it just a dream
still a fantasy
created for me

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-02 12:43 PM




(sigh) Oh Karen, this is soooooooooo beautiful, I know just how you feel and how lovely a feeling it is! (smiles) It may just be a dream now, but very soon, you will feel the power of true love in you, and it will last forever! (smiles) May the cupids touch your heart with the most beautiful love of your dreams, sweet star! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-02 01:01 PM


As always, your poetry is deeply heartfelt! I loved it!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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3 posted 2001-12-02 01:41 PM


Another lovely dream from you.
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-12-03 10:00 AM


That's some kinda dream u have there...   So sweet and so sensual...
Suetang
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5 posted 2001-12-03 06:37 PM


Karen
Your words sang such a beautiful song of love and longing.  Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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6 posted 2001-12-03 06:56 PM


Soon enough you are going to feel these effects of Love's Power! You deserve happiness sweet friend, and you will get it, believe me, you will! (big hugs)
Lovely poem

RP

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7 posted 2001-12-03 07:57 PM


Ah Karen, the power of love!
Another wonderful romantic write!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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8 posted 2001-12-03 09:10 PM


You write such beautiful romantic poems. Thank you for sharing this one.
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