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When Sunlight Falls---Marge's Challenge
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When Sunlight Falls---Marge's Challenge |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a weak attempt, here, but hopefully done with tenderness When Sunlight Falls When sunlight falls upon this heart that beats within, I know it’s because you’ve stepped into my life again. I know, for just a little while, your duty’s done and your home can be here by my side. It’s strange how I feel so much safer when you are here with me instead of out there guarding the borders. I feel pride at your willingness to serve, but the heart and soul of me rejoices in the sunlight. ©December 2, 2001 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Virginia, this is sooooooo gorgeous, I love it! I think this is beautiful, you me tthe challenge so well! Your heart and soul always shines with sunshien to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is beautiful VAS Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* soft feelings of safety and love flow in these words. Somehow we do feel safe when we are with the one we love...it must be that there is so much trust in our hearts when we love someone. I love the whole feel of it. Magnificent. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, A tender write, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Virginia, this is very well penned. Enjoyed so much! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a tender love poem, well written. There is nothing weak about it. I don't think it's possible to write about love weakly. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very good.. enjoyed very much. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very tender and very well expressed, Virginia! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ Thank you for participating in the challenge with your inspired thoughts~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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