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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-02 10:43 AM


Taking the glass from her hand and placing it
on the table he turns his attention back
to this woman who his very soul has known
throughout all time and who his heart has
longed and searched for his whole life
knowing deep within he would find her someday

With the gentlest of touch he traces her eyes
and runs his fingers down her cheek to finally
trace the moist, softness of her lips and when he
feels her quivering response to his touch he
leans forward, gazing deeply into her eyes,
and tastes the sweetness of her kiss

She melts close into him as he wraps his arms
around her, pulling her against his chest
that he can mingle their breath as he kisses
her with a deep longing that brings a moan
from each of them setting hearts beating with
a loud pounding they are sure the other can hear

Time is lost to these two lovers as they
drink deeply of the essence of the one who
has been a part of their soul from the
beginning of time and they are finally
allowed full release of the love and passion
which has been reserved to be shared only with each other

With a sigh they end the kiss but he
does not release her as he pulls her close
against him and wraps his arms possessively
over the one of his dreams determined to
never let her go for he has searched so
very long to have her here at his side

They are so lost in the love of each other
that they barely notice the sounds of joy
coming from outside but as if by magic the
light laughter penetrates their senses and
with a sigh he stands pulling her to her feet
still holding her close for she is precious to him

Together they go to the door which they open
on a scene that touches the magical soul
within the heart of these two lovers as they
are blessed to gaze upon that which many
believe to exist only in books of fantasy
but which they have always believed in their hearts

The deepness of the night has wrought a magic
here that is open to their view as they gaze
upon the sparkling snow and are awed by
the sight of a perfect fir tree in the middle
of the yard with the most amazing and enchanting
scene is being played out before their eyes

Karen TorbiakĀ©


Dream Weaver's Snowy Night Of Magic (part 1) /pip/Forum52/HTML/001192.html
Dream Weaver's Snowy Night Of Magic (part 2)/pip/Forum52/HTML/001207.html
Dream Weaver's Snowy Night Of Magic (part 3)/pip/Forum52/HTML/001212.html  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-12-02 12:40 PM


With the gentlest of touch he traces her eyes
and runs his fingers down her cheek to finally
trace the moist, softness of her lips and when he
feels her quivering response to his touch he
leans forward, gazing deeply into her eyes,
and tastes the sweetness of her kiss

She melts close into him as he wraps his arms
around her, pulling her against his chest
that he can mingle their breath as he kisses
her with a deep longing that brings a moan
from each of them setting hearts beating with
a loud pounding they are sure the other can hear

Time is lost to these two lovers as they
drink deeply of the essence of the one who
has been a part of their soul from the
beginning of time and they are finally
allowed full release of the love and passion
which has been reserved to be shared only with each other
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Yowswers this is a passionate lovely write..
I will have to bookmark this and read them all as one when you have completed this imaginative love story-series.
Beautiful weaving poetess Star.  

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-02 12:41 PM


This is vivid and absolutely lovely!
Filled me with desire (ha ha) if you were a man...whoah!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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3 posted 2001-12-02 12:53 PM




WOW!!! What have I been missing? (smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, I'm going to have to go back and read the rest of this dazzling series! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-12-02 01:33 PM


Ah Karen!  You said there would be more today and I should have known you had more magic up your sleeve than any magician I know!    
This is beautiful...especailly for us Canucks who love our snow!  
Thank you for this keeper.... ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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