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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-12-02 07:53 AM


It’s Not The Kiss of Death

She caught me
With
Desires kiss.

Injected me
With
Morphine bliss.

Twisted me
A
Tangled web.

Left me
Floating
In the ebb

What other victim
Lies
Like this?

Inculcate
In
Nirvana’s bliss

Hopeless freight
Yet
Happy in it’s fate.


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-12-02 08:06 AM



Shoot Sy...just take it like a man...

and enjoy!

Nan
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2 posted 2001-12-02 08:51 AM


It's a difficult job, Sy - But somebody's gotta do it - and you do it sooo well...
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-02 10:04 AM


We have to warn those victims!!!!  
Seymour, it's the kiss that does it every time!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-12-02 10:08 AM


Sunshine,
I'll try. *L*

Nan,
Love you too. *L*

Irish,
You are so right. *L*

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-12-02 10:33 AM





She dont look so scary does she???
She said to have Randy stop by her web for chips and beer *L*  
very cool poem me Stinky-babes
*ww*   me

Startime
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6 posted 2001-12-02 10:44 AM


*giggling* it is so clear that you love the way you were captured and held by the love of your life. This poem makes me smile big time. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-12-02 11:06 AM


JM,
Maybe not to you. But Randy will be delighted to stop by for chips and beer.
Winkiewikie Stinky

Startime,
Can't ask for more then that. *L*

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8 posted 2001-12-02 11:47 AM




(big huggssssssssss) What a wonderful poem of love and seduction! (sigh) How beautiful it must be to be tangled in a spider web of desire and be kissed by such love! (sigh) I love it!!! You always write so wonderfully, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton




Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-12-02 02:04 PM


Noah,
Thank you for the read and kind reply.

Tracey
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10 posted 2001-12-02 08:29 PM


Ah what a lovely place to be. I love the feelings conveyed here Seymour.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-12-02 09:31 PM


Tracey,
Thank you so much for the read and like.

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-12-04 01:44 PM


Yes she got me too...and I can't wait for the next kiss...James
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-12-04 03:30 PM


Thank you James.
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14 posted 2001-12-05 11:46 AM


Too happy to struggle... now there's a state of mind to achieve! *G* I love this, Seymour... you lend your grace to a new style. *S*
mirror man
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15 posted 2001-12-05 01:54 PM


I read this as addiction.  Well said.
sodpossom
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16 posted 2001-12-05 01:56 PM


It will get you everytime.Very well done!
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2001-12-05 11:07 PM


Suthern,
Thank you sweet. *L*

Mirror man,
Nice comment.

Sodpossom,
Thank you for the well done.

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