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Goodbye- Yellow Brick Road
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Goodbye- Yellow Brick Road |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Silence shall reign my world lips shall never speak words that once held my tomorrows in their kiss. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let me guess what you were watching last night... hmmm....thought so. Enjoyed! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I watched nothing last night....but thanks for enjoying "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Your writing gets better and better and this is very good. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, I can feel the despair in this poem, my heart goes out to you, for the Wizard Of Oz within will grant you love to last eternally and have your heart singing and see everything! (sigh) Believe in yourself, sweet friend, and all your dreams will come true! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I really hope that there is a magical kiss out there that will unlock those words one day and make them light up the heavens of both your hearts. **hugs**This poem brought tears to my eyes for you, dear one. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sad...raw...well written. I love it. ((HUGS)) Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Maureen, *sigh* this is very good! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nothing to say here but I understand the thoughts well. Bautifully said. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I need this some...I can't seem to shutup! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Short and very, very sweet Joe Lamando |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, I don't think I am getting better...but thank you for the kind support of my writing. Mistletoe Angel, despair, sadness, emptiness, heart wrenching, just words to me, I am on my way to becoming emotionless, to live in shadows. Thank you Noah. Startime, the last time I felt a magical kiss, it was a mistake in the making. Tears? What are they...I have used all mine up. Thank you for your caring comments. Temptress, that's me sad, raw and well written in memory. Glad you liked. Thank you Nancy. catalinamoon, thank yo Sandra for understanding...my thoughts Kathleen (Kay)I always enjoy whatever you have to say. hugssss Joe, thank you for the sweet...not so sure that is what it was but thank you. ~Wynter |
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