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Ocean Beauty
Junior Member

since 2001-11-24

Posts 18
VT, USA

0 posted 2001-12-01 10:05 PM

I sit here now, alone and scared,
My heart feels like it cannot be repaired.

I gave you my heart, trusted your love,
But lies can disguise to look just like a dove.

You told me you loved me, said you'd never leave,
I listened to every word you said, being naive.

What comes around, goes around, they say,
I guess it was my turn to be hurt that day.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-01 10:12 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Such sadness of lost love fills tehse words, dearest friend! (sad sigh) My heart goes to you! This love may not have been real, but He is preparing you the most beautiful true love, and your loving heart will find it! (big hugggsssssss) Believe in yourself, and all your dreams will come true! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-12-01 10:14 PM

aww I know you will find a TRUE love soon enough. Keep your head UP

RP

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-01 10:25 PM

Isn't it amazing how true that old saying is, it does come around eventually.
Very well written, Dawn. Welcome to these blue pages.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-12-01 10:31 PM

I know just how you feel but remember with what comes around there could be love just around the corner for you. Keep your faith in it and true, honest love will find you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2001-12-02 12:21 PM

That was then,
this is now,
unknown when
or just how.

Such words lost,
never spoke.
Feelings tossed.
Love awoke.

In this way,
loss of fear.
Start today,
know I'm near.

This day on
you shall see,
morning's Dawn
captures me.

Couldn't help myself ..., wasn't it my turn??

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-12-02 12:53 PM

Welcome to Passions. I'm probably old enough to be your mother

and I'm still naive. It's ok. Nothing wrong with it.
Look to the future and don't look back!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2001-12-03 10:14 AM

Dawn, it is indeed really sad to be hurt in love. I can understand that all too well. In fact, I think everyone of us here might have been hurt before...

But I hope you and all others who are hurt (that includes myself

) will find love soon...

[This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 12-03-2001).]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2001-12-03 06:35 PM

Ocean Beauty
What a magnificent piece of writing you have given us, I loved it. Welcome to Passions and I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care......Sue

Suetang

PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

9 posted 2001-12-04 03:02 AM

Nice Work, Ocean Beauty
We must beware of those Sheep in Wolves Clothing
they'll snap and try to bite you everytime.
Being able to move on is the key.

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
~ Abraham Maslo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-12-04 03:22 AM

Yes the journey of love comes with risks...we never know how we will feel until the journey progresses...James

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

11 posted 2001-12-09 01:51 AM

BEEN THERE...DONE THAT
QUITE A FEW TIMES ACTUALLY UNTIL...

I MET THE LOVE OF MY LIFE, AND NOW WEIRD AS IT MAY SEEM IT WAS WELL WORTH IT !!

(((BIG HUGS)))

GOD BLESS YOU
TIMOTHYS ANGEL

Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

12 posted 2001-12-09 01:58 AM

just as it so passed
your turn came to feel pain's blade
so shall also pass
your turn to know love's healing
all things come to pass in turn

WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

[This message has been edited by wornways (edited 12-09-2001).]

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