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misguided angel
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0 posted 2001-12-01 07:38 PM


*And Then We Danced

Your smile was slow and easy
the kind that lights up the night,
going right up to your eyes,
giving me shivers of delight.
Saying ‘ I can’t refuse a lady’s request
when its so sweetly asked.’
As you took me in your arms
your desire was so thinly masked.
Holding me a little too close
with your hand upon my waist.
The sweet words you whispered
were anything but chaste.
As the music begins to move us
you lean and kiss me on the cheek.
your soft breath upon my neck
leaving me unable to speak....

and then we danced.

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

© Copyright 2001 Andrea - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-01 07:59 PM


Oh Andrea, this is soooo dreamy and sensual.
Very well done with tasteful imagery.  
Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

misguided angel
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2 posted 2001-12-01 08:10 PM


Glad you enjoyed it, Nancy. I just hope the cowboy I wrote it for does too  
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-12-01 08:44 PM


Oh this reminds me of my cowboy friend Adam....he was shy to dance in front of others so I had to nag him, lol.
Once I got him over his shyness, he was a great dancer.

RP

misguided angel
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4 posted 2001-12-01 08:50 PM


RosePetal, I am glad this reminded you of someone special.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-01 08:51 PM


How could he not love this? It is so sensually wonderful. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

misguided angel
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6 posted 2001-12-01 08:53 PM


thank you Startime. I am yet to dance with my cowboy but I think it would go something like that  
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Bec
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7 posted 2001-12-02 04:48 PM


Misguided Angel...

"Saying ‘ I can’t refuse a lady’s request
when its so sweetly asked.’"
Dancing with a cowboy is just like that...  
I love this poem, so much imagery...  

Bec  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

misguided angel
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8 posted 2001-12-02 04:54 PM


Thanks Bec, what could be better than a nice slow dance with a cute cowboy.  
Thanks for your comments.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Alan
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9 posted 2001-12-02 05:40 PM


This is good little lady.. enjoyed it a lot.
misguided angel
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10 posted 2001-12-03 03:25 AM


Thanks Alan, I'm glad you liked  
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

SEA
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with you
11 posted 2001-12-03 09:08 AM


oooo   what a perfect part 2!   Will there be more????
peaches73533
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12 posted 2001-12-03 09:59 AM


This is great.I love to dance and cowboys are good too.
Peaches

misguided angel
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13 posted 2001-12-03 04:03 PM


Sea, I am working on more but I think the way it is heading I should go over to adult  
Peaches, thank you. Glad you like my favourite topic too  
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

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