Whispers of Dawn (Marge's Challenge)

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-12-01 01:53 PM

Lost in the memory of you
I stand silently screaming
Your voice in my head
Softly calling,

In you, I am so lost
I lay weeping
I feel silence
Deep inside me
My soul echoes
My heart aches
Where traces of you remain,
The rain falling, my tears

In shades of midnight
I write to you by candlelight as you
Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear
Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there
I feel your warmth, your breathing still
Guides me to the haven of my
Dreams among the stars

I love you for the passion I feel when
I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your
Beauty, for the colors I use to
Paint our canvas of gathered time
In vibrant colors
Walking in summertime,
Gently falling snows of winter,
Autumn leaves blowing

Time is all I have in
These

Whispers of dawn,

Your calming peace renews my heart,
Where again we
Dance in salvation

Time
is still
~~~~~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 12-01-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-12-01 02:01 PM

Greeneyes,
Enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-12-01 02:02 PM

Oh Lauren! This is beautiful...exquisite.
Soft and haunting...WOW!
Very well done and enjoyed!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-12-01 02:04 PM

Lost in the memory of you
I stand silently screaming
Your voice in my head
Softly calling,

In you, I am so lost
I lay weeping
I feel silence
Deep inside me
My soul echoes
My heart aches
Where traces of you remain,
The rain falling, my tears

In shades of midnight
I write to you by candlelight as you
Lay sleeping, I can no longer hear
Your sweet slumber, but I know you are there
I feel your warmth, your breathing still
Guides me to the haven of my
Dreams among the stars

I love you for the passion I feel when
I close my eyes, for the inspiration of your
Beauty, for the colors I use to
Paint our canvas of gathered time
==========================================
SIGH

Oh Im sooo glad Im not Marge cuz I couldnt pick...
so I'll just say we have winner on them all

OK..yeah Im butterfly biased on this one *S*

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-01 02:04 PM

(sigh) Oh Lauren, this is sooooooooo beautiful and sweet! (sigh) You always express love and emotions soooooooo enchantingly! (smiles) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-12-01 02:08 PM

*sigh* a poetic delight that comes straight from the heart. Such whispers that touch your heart. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-12-01 04:43 PM

Beautifully done!

I love reading your work!

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-12-01 04:45 PM

"Time is all I have...in These Whispers of Dawn". WOW! How deeply meaningful.

Really enjoyed this my friend.

jwesley

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-12-01 09:05 PM

Greeneyes - I love reading your writings, romantic they are...

BC

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2001-12-01 11:04 PM

Your words float on
the whisper of dawn
with greeneyes smiling
a lovely song

Very nicely done, Greeneyes!
I'm just glad I'm not the one to pick from all of these poetic submissions.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2001-12-02 12:28 PM

pssst ....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-12-02 11:18 AM

GreenEyes~
WOW ! Inspiration flits through with beauty and delicacy~
Thank you soooooooo much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2001-12-02 01:30 PM

Lauren, simply stunning, my friend.

I've never done a challenge. Perhaps I'll look in to it. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

13 posted 2001-12-02 07:24 PM

Soooooo soft and lovely, Greeneyes! Well done!

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

14 posted 2001-12-03 12:23 PM

Incredibly well done! Enchanting in a way
Love it!
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2001-12-03 12:51 PM

Seymour Tabin~

thank you for peeking in I appreciate your time in reading...

~~

Nancy~

Thankyou my friend...I appreciate you much....HUGS...

~~

Janet Marie~

sweet friend....thank you always for your replies....they mean more to me then you know.....

~~

Noah~

I just love your responses....thank you so much for always being so kind....

~~

Startime~

Thankyou my friend....from the heart always....

HUGS...

~~

Jen~

I love reading yours...thank you my friend....HUGS to you....

~~

jwesley~

I appreciate your thoughts, thak you very much....

~~

Bill Charles~

as are your my friend....thank you for taking your time to read...

~~

Midnitesun~

Me too....*L* thank you my friend....HUGS to you....

~~

ctowen~

PSSSTTTT....thank you....look for that rain...

its wonderful...appreciate you...

~~

Marge~

thank you for the inspiration hugs to you my friend, heading your way shortly...(FLA) woohooooooo.....HUGS to you...

~~

Michael~

~~

Denise and Cindi~

Thank you for reading and taking your time to leave your comments...

HUGS.....

all.....on the way....

Greeneyes~

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PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

16 posted 2001-12-03 04:37 PM

This is very Pretty, Greeneyes
while reading this I could imagine
laying on the grass at night looking up at the stars.
Truely nice Muse.

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
~ Abraham Maslo

PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

17 posted 2001-12-03 04:40 PM

OH YEAH,
" What was Marge's Challenge???"

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