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Silkened |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Silkened By: Noah Eaton 3/19/01 My frosted heart, lightly frozen in the winter of my yearning for you Thaws as I hear my angel sing in rapture, rain of Venus showering my soul My eyes soften in tears as my body lightens, pulling me close to her Silkened in her desire Flouncing in Aphrodite’s wind, Her ethereal breath brings me to her Her warm spring breath alluring me into her arms at last My feeble arms and legs can’t move Silkened in her voice Her eyes open to me like budding roses, more gorgeous than rubies Roseate lips sighing in eternal prom dance My dove angel’s face balmed in the sunshine, my love purely glistening, lighting my smile Silkened in her beauty I hold her velvet soul in my hands, as she touches my heart Satin whispers ricochet through my ears, heating in passions flame setting my heart aflame Her goddess wings wrapped around me, her healing caress erasing all my worries Silkened in her purity Her lips kiss mine, closing my eyes, I know there is a god Thanking Him for giving me this angel, holding heaven to my heart Lips attached, tongues touching gently, a tear falls down my cheek, my blessing to God Silkened with joy Holding her hand, wherever eternity’s winds take us I feel my heart light, keeping me warm everyday My heart beats on, jumping like a happy boy at recess Silkened in her love… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
So romantically soft with the perfect title. Very well done, Noah. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very silky Noah...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Noah! Also I was drawn in by the title...which is my problem area...can never think of a good one. Well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Another nice soft, romantic write from you! This is perfect my dear *kisses* RP |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A softly silkened write, Noah. You are quite a romantic.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - a most lovely writing that I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you for sharing this... BC |
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Ocean Beauty Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 18VT, USA |
I love how your words flow so naturally together to make such a beautiful work of art. I can't wait to read more of your wonderful masterpieces!!  ~Dawn~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Ssssilky and Sublime Noah....you have so much romance in your soul. I believe you are Cassanova in disguise. Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah Wow!, this silkened suffusion this poetic confection created illusion of loving perfection Write on Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah,Beuatiful and romantically written.Your flow is smooth as silk.You have drwan me in as always.You have such a beautiful heart.(hugs) to you my friend and thank you for sharing. Peaches |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
silkened is perfect... regards, sudhir |
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