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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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A word from you will heat up the room - the frozen room. A smile from you will melt away the ice. I desperate seek... and seek...your voice. The room is cold - filled with dreary leaves. There is only a corner is filled with warmth - The shelves with the portrait of your own reflection. Yet a word from you will heat up the room - the frozen room. A smile from you will melt away the ice. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. ~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What a wonderful way to put it. How cold and empty things seem to be but someone we love can bring such warmth with them. Very well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
For sure...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the way you look at things and put them into words, my friend. jwesley |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's the kind of warm picture to turn into wallpaper, to warm up the whole room. Well done! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very nice write I loved it. Lauren |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hehe...it would be cool to read that out to a friend... and maybe put it on the wallpaper! thanks all for replying. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Vivian! May sweet true love forever warm your heart and fill it with joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vivian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is lovely! A lover can do so many wonderful things to us that we never imagined possible. |
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