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VAS
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Water

1
Splash, dash
elan, flash
born of water
not of wine

2
flowing, glowing,
rippling, growing
swelling in spring
it sings

3
living, breathing,
teeming, seething
through mountains,
valleys, hills

4
trickling, sprinkling,
rippling, spilling
over land and
seas of green

5
washing, cleansing,
sparkling, dowsing,
errors and cares
that life can bring

6
dancing, prancing,
falling, rising
all comprising
as living being

7
waterís life
without it, naught,
itís gleam is bright
itís lack is wrought

8
praise for water
raise its song
its dance is living
its powerís strong

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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I am a water lover and therefore I absolutely love this poem and the way it sang with the sounds of water. Very well done.   **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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VAS,
A delightful write. *L*
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*splashes Vas* hehehe water is so much fun to play in. Also, it is a necessity for everyday tasks! Loved this!
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(smiles) Oh boy, I love water, and always love swimming in it and going to the ocean! (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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VAS - different, I like it...

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Um... I have to use the bathroom.
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